Revising and editing are similar in that both steps require the writing to reread their writing, gather feedback, and make changes. However, they are not identical. Revising requires the writer to make changes such as adding more details, replacing or removing words, and ensuring that the writer is expressing their ideas as clearly as they can. Editing requires the writer to make changes regarding errors in spelling, capitalization, grammar, mechanics, usage, punctuation, and formatting.
Attributions:
"Understand the difference between revising and editing" Youtube, uploaded by Smekens Education, Nov. 2023, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vkan07R2-QA.
Permissions: YouTube CC-BY License
Instructions: Read the frist sample paragraph. This paragraph is intentionally rough—contains weak ideas, awkward sentences, and grammar mistakes. Then, read the second sample paragraph. What has changed?
Sample Paragraph that needs revising and editing:
Social media is really popular nowdays and almost everyone has an account on something like Instagram or TikTok. Some people say its good becuase you can stay in touch with freinds and see whats happening in the world, but other people say its bad because it can make you feel sad or left out when you see other peoples posts. I think sometimes it can be fun but also distracting when you should be doing homework or talking to your family. Some people spend hours scrolling and it can affect there sleep and there mood. Overall social media has both pros and cons.
Sample Paragraph that has been revised and edited:
Social media is very popular nowadays, and almost everyone has an account on platforms like Instagram or TikTok. Some people believe it is beneficial because it allows you to stay in touch with friends and keep up with current events. However, others argue that it can have negative effects, such as making you feel sad or left out when viewing other people’s posts. In my opinion, social media can be enjoyable at times but also distracting when you should be doing homework or spending time with your family. Many people spend hours scrolling, which can affect their sleep and mood. Overall, social media has both advantages and disadvantages.
Compare the two paragraphs above. Can you identify what has been revised and what has been edited?
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